I could feel the sweat drip down my face i was cold felt it like ice i didn't want to take a step i felt i would fall over the perser was on me i knew my name would be called soon i wish i could turn I wish I could turn invisible and Fly Away I felt like I would never stand again well until I tried so I said it was the worst I could ever think of yeah but Yeah but that was all in my head i would be next a cry relief was inside of me when it was nice when the unbelievable happeden
Tuesday 18 September 2018
1 comment:
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Kia Ora Tevita
ReplyDeleteGood on you for getting more posts on your blog.
Next time I am in class I can help you format the text so we can see it all
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie